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Thursday, October 21, 2021

Credible - Believable

 Great authors make characters with believable personalities. They show personalities through these: Actions, Dialogue (direct speech), Reactions, Physical descriptions, and thoughts. 

I can see this in Beans character. He is obnoxious and very disrespectful you can see this when Beans leaned across the table, took a deep breath and blasted away. The flames of the candles vanished. Beans has no table manners or no manners in general. Beans was scooping chocolate icing from the birthday cake onto his finger. With the drama of a sword-swallower, he threw back his head and sank his finger into his mouth. When it came out, it was clean. In this part of the book, him being obnoxious and disrespectful is clearly shown. The author has used actions and dialogue really well to give Beans a consistent obnoxious personality.

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